Sunday, December 9, 2012

Open Prompt -- Dec 9th


1980. A recurring theme in literature is the classic war between a passion and responsibility. For instance, a personal cause, a love, a desire for revenge, a determination to redress a wrong, or some other emotion or drive may conflict with moral duty. Choose a literary work in which a character confronts the demands of a private passion that conflicts with his or her responsibilities. In a well-written essay show clearly the nature of the conflict, its effects upon the character, and its significance to the work.
         Europe in the 1660s was not a fun time to be alive, and a series of misfortunes has forced sixteen year old Griet to become a maid in an artist's home.  While in her new home, Griet discovers fantastic art which she soon becomes enamored with.  Tracy Chevalier paints this story of a maid with a conflicting passion in her novel Girl With A Pearl Earring.
        Griet grew up watching her father paint the tiles that decorated homes across all of Holland.   Her father became blind after a terrible accident, and Griet was shipped off to become a maid to help feed her family.  The family she worked for was a difficult one: The mother was unloving and demanding, the six children often misbehaved, and Griet became lonely and overworked.  The only thing Griet liked about working was the father and his art, a skilled painter who entrusted her to clean his studio.    His studio was off-limits to everyone but himself and Griet for cleaning.   In the studio Griet found a sacred, peaceful place where amazingly realistic portraits were painted, and soon her own father's painted tiles could not compare with the masterpieces the great Vermeer created. 
        However, Griet struggled with this newly discovered passion.  Vermeer's wife hated the fact that Griet had permission into the studio when she did not, and gave the poor maid even more work to do.  Griet understood that she must keep her position as a maid because her family depended on her meager income, and so she often had to push aside her desire to sit and watch Vermeer paint during her rare free moments and instead do as her mistress ordered.  Griet is seen fighting many mental battles between her former obedient self and her new rebellious self.  And while she usually choses responsibility over passion, by the end of the novel she is a changed person: Valuing her hard work while embracing her new passion.
       The conflict between responsibility and passion is the focus of the plot of Girl With A Pearl Earring, and its significance is not to be overlooked.  The 1660s was not a time to fool around in, as even the smallest of mistakes could cost you your job, which could cost you your life.  While conditions are not so extreme today, it is understood that a balance between work and play is essential.  Like Griet, we must have our priorities in line, first focusing on what is needed to be done for our survival, then our passions.

2 comments:

  1. Once again, I really enjoyed this Kenzie!! You answer the prompt effectively in that you argue that Griet struggled with this internal passion to watch her boss's husband paint or assume her responsibilities of working and cleaning for her boss. I have not read this book but it seems that it addresses the prompt perfectly. I like that you do not overly summarize the plot of the play and instead explain how each scene contributes to answering the prompt. Great job with this!!

    ReplyDelete
  2. I would be a little careful with some of the words you used. The first sentence sounds a little too... informal to be used in an essay. I think it's a combination of the understatement and the use of the word "fun". Also, I'm a little hesitant about whether this would count as a good literature choice based on the fact that it seems to be a more modern novel and I'm not sure whether it would be qualified as "literature". This really isn't for me to say, but for the most part, I would be a little bit more cautious in picking more modern novels. Again, this really isn't for me to say; maybe Ms. Holmes could say more on this subject? I'm just really saying my thought at the moment.

    Anyway, about the essay itself... This is really well done! The points that you pick seem to support the essay topic really well. I like how you separated the essay into a quick summary, followed by addressing the points that the prompt asked you to address. It seems to be a very clear and easy way to make sure everything that needs to be discussed is. My only small critique is on the line "Griet is seen fighting many mental battles between her former obedient self and her new rebellious self." While I think I understand what you're saying here (a rebellious part of her wants to keep watching the artist at work but she must be a maid), I would try to make that a bit more obvious, since not everyone might regard her watching her master paint as "rebellious". I kind of missed that point when I read the essay the first time. Aside from that, fantastic work!

    ReplyDelete